IELTS Writing Task-2 June

Competitive is a skill that is required in modern society in order to succeed. How does competitiveness affect the individual. Is it positive or negative quality?

Owing to globalisation, competition has become utter need to have success in life. Being competitive is nowadays considered as crucial part of life. To compete is need of modern world but it is threating the personal life of individuals in many cases.

Healthy competition can be encountered in every walk of life. A person with more traits is usually selected over the one with more experience, but lack of skills. The major reason behind this notion is overgrowing competition. Being competitive is a significant aptitude of a potential applicant for a promising job. To illustrate, if there is a demand for well-paid and challenging job, this trait can alleviate the road to success of the applicant. Moreover, a team leader bestowed with skill can instil sense of competition in his team mates which can lead to very good outcome.

However, competitive behaviour of the society has hindered the social life of individuals. People pay more attention to their future than the life they are leading. Youth is sacrificing their enjoyment for the sake of career. Children are becoming bookworms due to pressure of parents, teachers and their counterparts to excel in academics. To exemplify, parents arrange extra tutorials for their ward after school, due to which students have to miss their outdoor activities. They lack in health in order to attain their forth coming opportunities.

All in all, it can be asserted that masses should compete with individuals, professionals and even nations, but should not forget that humans need love and attention also apart from only traits that can be beneficial for their career growth

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